Chapter 4 Released and Minor Updates


Chapter 4 is released! Time to continue the story!

As you all know, this is a WIP. So I don’t only work on upcoming chapters, I also revisit my previous chapters and add to it. Sometimes it’s because of your feedback, sometimes it’s because I felt like the scene could play out a little differently in retrospect, and sometimes I just have new ideas that I thought plays well into the current narrative.

Here’s the main changes I’ve made to the work currently (besides bug and spelling fixes) :

Chapter 2

  • Changed Ishraq’s weapon
  • Added burial scene after they acquired the lotus

Chapter 3

  • Edited dinner scene at the village
  • Added scenes when they travel to the port from the village
  • Edited companion scenes at their chambers in Sadaiva

I only hope that with every revision and update, this story will become more wonderful, and that I can bring a bit of joy to some of you out there.

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